Monday, May 21, 2012


Expostion :  In the small of screwstone texas. The people were separated by money. In the west side there are beautiful lights,fast cars, huge skyscrapers, huge banks and west side was ran by the people.  On the east side there is just poverty, people getting murdered, drug dealers run everything, the casual houses are smalls huts. all the big houses were owned by drug lords, there was also some tiny stores and small establishments. It was everyones dream to get to the west side. People would save up for years just so they could spend one day in the west side. The only way to get to the west side is by crossing a bridge and you need to buy yourself in, get invited, or escorted.

Inciting incident:   in the east side there was 3 young boys named Neko,Nino,and Spice. The 3 brothers were orphans. an old man that owned a small dry cleaners would take care of them his name was old man rick. Neko would watch all the drugs lords drop off all their nice suits and clothings. one day he was cleaning a jacket for one of them and he founds a stack of 30,000 dollars. Not knowing what to do he put it back. The next day the druglord came in too pick up his suit , neko in a hurry got his suit and told him that he left some money in it and its inside that pockets. The druglord laughed and told him to keep it , he said that Neko reminded him of his younger self. Neko ran and told his brothers, they were so excited knowing that they could have a normal life with this kind of money and that they wouldn't have to burden old man rick anymore. they fell asleep dreaming of their new possibilities.

rising action: they woke up early and went to work. when arriving there they noticed that the door was open already, they slowly creeped inside the builiding and saw old man rick shot 3 times.  He was still alive and he told Neko too cum close so he could tell him something. he told Neko too leave the east side and make it too the other side, and help this side once he had the money. Neko and his brothers picked him up and buried him, they later sat down and figured out how they could make the most of all this money. after hours of thinking Neko said he had an idea but they would have to buy tuxedos,weapons,and a nice car. 

climax: that night the brothers bought a fast expensive race car, 3 new tuxs, 3 automatic weapons, lots of bombs, and 3 mask. They went to the bridge to cross the to the west side and planted bombs through out the whole bridge. The plan was a go they were going to rob the biggest bank on the west side. The next morning , they used the rest of there money to go through the bridge. They were so surprised of everything and how beautiful the other side was in person. When they arrive to the bank there was golden statues. Nino stayed in the car , he was going to be the get away driver. Neko and Spice go into the bank guns hot,and kill everybody . Spice watched the door, and Neko hops over the counter opens the safe with one of the bomb and takes 1 billions dollars and a couple bricks of gold. As they come out the police come and its turns into a gun fight. They werent going to make it out of there all alive.

falling action: Spice tells his brother that he ll stay and fight. he says that he ll hold them back for long enough for them to get away. Neko didnt want to leave his brother but he realized that it was going to be the only way to make it out alive. Nino and Neko drove off ,15 mins later spice was shots 25 times. The 2 brothers made it to the bridge and activated the bombs they planted the night before,clearing the way and destroying half the bridge. They made it back safe, but made it impossible to ever go back to the west side without the bridge there is no way there

resolution: the 2 brothers made it back alive, happy, and thankful. they gave money too all the poor familys,cleaned up the streets , and even hired some of the people to be police officers so they could get rid of all the crime. Neko and Nino made the east side a better place for everybody. they made a statue in the name of there brother never forgetting the sacrifice that he made.


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